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Everyone knows that her death was unfair,
Coming from the one whom most cared,
I never wanted to leave her side,
Now I run with pain to hide,
What is love with this agonizing force?
Since then I've been living in this remorse,
Pain springing from the pass source,

We argued the day before her demise,
It was the sight of ruby tears that I realize
That it was the last glimpse of her breathing,
Followed by days of endless grieving,
How do I deal with this regret?
I hoped that this fate wouldn't been met,
Sorrow spinning in roulette,

I should have covered my eyes so I couldn't see,
Knowing that this sensation isn't me,
Wincing at the substance I did eat,
I began to sweat from pressure and heat,
What will the Thief do by my will?
Yes, ordering the absent me to kill,
Only one task to fulfill,

With golden substance in my hand,
I was bursting with strength that life can't stand,
Justice and balance was out of my vision,
I am sent on an exterminating mission,
Why did I ever ascend?
She never knew it was her end,
Giving her wounds that she couldn't comprehend,

Let this pain overwhelm little Aries,
With the discomfort that death buries,
Out of Seer's sight and out of Her mind,
I blasted away with power undefined,
How much time does it take to end one life?
Thief's vendetta ending this strife,
Sharper than any other knife,

Stunned from the sudden dread,
It was crimson pools that she bled,
I was in a killer's vanity,
Killing in the Thief's insanity,
Why did I kill her like this?
She was my possible wed and so harmless,
Life's only pleasure and bliss,

Later in fields I awoke,
Then at a bitter sight I provoke,
Her body was beat dark red,
I just killed the one I wanted to wed,
Who could do this to me, just who?
I sweetly kissed her and whispered, 'adieu'

Aradia, she was my queen,
A life together could be seen,
I couldn't find a reason not to love her,
She was my timeless treasure,
How do I survive on my own?
Hear me as I cry and moan,
Life has never felt so cold, bitter, and alone
Ello! I finally wrote a poem! It took me forever! But I think it was worth it.

Anyways, I wrote this poem of Aradia and Sollux because they're my OTP and basically the greatest love story that was ever created in this universe. It's just so.... :iconcryforeverplz:

I hope you enjoy this poem. hehehehe~

The picture isn't mine. I found it on youtube from a video called Pieces by Red.


Anything in homestuck is not mine. Just saying.
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:iconpurpleauraxd:
PurpleAuraXD Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Okay, I think my heart just exploded from all the sadness.

Beautifully written. My feels go off to you.
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:iconashfeather702:
ashfeather702 Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Hehehe thank you!
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:iconchibi-shiv-212:
Chibi-Shiv-212 Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013
Q-Q right in the feels...the poem is well written
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:iconashfeather702:
ashfeather702 Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
hehehehe thank you ^////////^
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:iconchibi-shiv-212:
Chibi-Shiv-212 Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013
You're welcome~
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:iconpsychicbender-mika:
Psychicbender-Mika Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Student Writer
Auuuuuuuugh my patron troll Sollux and my favorite troll Aradia... baaaaaaaaaaw :iconsobbplz: HERE HELP ME CLEAN UP MY SCATTERED FEELS AND YOU CAN HAVE THEM ALL
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:iconashfeather702:
ashfeather702 Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
*scatters to find what's left of the feels* AHHHHHHHHHHH! This clean up is impossi8le D : : : :
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:iconpsychicbender-mika:
Psychicbender-Mika Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013  Student Writer
*installs feel magnet* *feels all attract to the magnet* HERE HAVE THEM ALLLLLLL
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:iconlondonatheart1475:
Londonatheart1475 Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow. This is just as good as the nepeta poem!! :iconbigheartplz:
:iconiloveyouplz:
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:iconashfeather702:
ashfeather702 Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Aw, really? Thanks~
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:iconmeikoazoroua:
MeikoAzoroua Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
ii am liiterally cryiing
why do you do thii2 two me
ii ju2t--
ii cant--
ii--
ju2t--
:iconcryforeverplz:
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:iconashfeather702:
ashfeather702 Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I'm sorry!!!!!!!! D :::: I can't help with all the feels!
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:iconmeikoazoroua:
MeikoAzoroua Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
;n;
2o many feel2
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:iconashfeather702:
ashfeather702 Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
*:iconsupertighthugplz:* It's okay, let it out!
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:iconmeikoazoroua:
MeikoAzoroua Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
lol okay im good that made me laugh
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:iconashfeather702:
ashfeather702 Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
hehehehe!!!!!!!!
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:iconmeikoazoroua:
MeikoAzoroua Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
x3 thanks~
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:iconmeikoazoroua:
MeikoAzoroua Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
x3 thanks~
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delilahkitties Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012
why must you hurt me in this way? ;; v ;;
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:iconashfeather702:
ashfeather702 Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Sorry, 8ro........ 8ut the pain is okay? Right? I just love writing painful things!
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:iconlulu-bubbles:
LuLu-Bubbles Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012
amazing :'3
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:iconashfeather702:
ashfeather702 Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thank you!!!!!!!!
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:iconlulu-bubbles:
LuLu-Bubbles Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012
XD Again, you're welcome :3
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:iconaradiamegido20:
aradiamegido20 Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
my patron troll is aradia, and i love sollux.their my otp, when i read this i got all of the feels!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i love it!!!!!!!!!
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:iconashfeather702:
ashfeather702 Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
awwwwwwwwwww! I'm glad you really liked it!
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cynderandspyrorocks Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012   Traditional Artist
:iconcryforeverplz::iconcry2plz::icondragoncryingplz::iconsobbplz::iconsobbingplz:

OHH MY OTP!! </3
MY FEELLSSS!!! ALL OF THEM!!!
i just LOVE / SHIP THEM SOO MCUH!!! D':

*goes to the corner and continues crying forever!*
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:iconashfeather702:
ashfeather702 Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
It's okay, it's okay! *:iconsupertighthugplz:*
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:iconcynderandspyrorocks:
cynderandspyrorocks Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012   Traditional Artist
*:iconbrohugplz: snif* okay i think i better now
thank you :iconilikeitplz:
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:iconkyoplusgirmeanscool:
Kyoplusgirmeanscool Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is so beautiful :iconcryforeverplz: I love this ship so much
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:iconashfeather702:
ashfeather702 Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks! and Same! It's my OTP~
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:iconkyoplusgirmeanscool:
Kyoplusgirmeanscool Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:D yay!~
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:iconchibiseme597:
ChibiSeme597 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
ALL THE FEELS.
ALL OF THEM.
:iconcry2plz:
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:iconashfeather702:
ashfeather702 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
*pat pat* Sollux and Aradia make the most tragic love story.... :heart:
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:iconchibiseme597:
ChibiSeme597 Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
They do...:(
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:iconashfeather702:
ashfeather702 Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
All 8ecause of that Spider 8itch XXXXP
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:iconchibiseme597:
ChibiSeme597 Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
lolz, yeah...:XD:
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:iconmyturnlittlebro:
MyTurnLittleBro Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012   General Artist
even though i dont ship it

this is amazing

:iconeridancryforeverplz:
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:iconashfeather702:
ashfeather702 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
awwww thank you!
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:iconmyturnlittlebro:
MyTurnLittleBro Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012   General Artist
np
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:iconjakeyflinrider:
jakeyflinrider Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012
:iconsobplz: oh my god! I forgot how sad this ship was!
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:iconashfeather702:
ashfeather702 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I know right! Cry out the feels, 8ro!!!!!!!!
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:iconjakeyflinrider:
jakeyflinrider Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012
:iconsobplz: can I have a hug?)
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:iconashfeather702:
ashfeather702 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
*hugs* It's okay, let it out man, let it out!
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:iconjakeyflinrider:
jakeyflinrider Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012
Thanks QuQ
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:iconashfeather702:
ashfeather702 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Sorry, I just like to write out the feels!
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