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Everyone knows that her death was unfair,
Coming from the one whom most cared,
I never wanted to leave her side,
Now I run with pain to hide,
What is love with this agonizing force?
Since then I've been living in this remorse,
Pain springing from the pass source,

We argued the day before her demise,
It was the sight of ruby tears that I realize
That it was the last glimpse of her breathing,
Followed by days of endless grieving,
How do I deal with this regret?
I hoped that this fate wouldn't been met,
Sorrow spinning in roulette,

I should have covered my eyes so I couldn't see,
Knowing that this sensation isn't me,
Wincing at the substance I did eat,
I began to sweat from pressure and heat,
What will the Thief do by my will?
Yes, ordering the absent me to kill,
Only one task to fulfill,

With golden substance in my hand,
I was bursting with strength that life can't stand,
Justice and balance was out of my vision,
I am sent on an exterminating mission,
Why did I ever ascend?
She never knew it was her end,
Giving her wounds that she couldn't comprehend,

Let this pain overwhelm little Aries,
With the discomfort that death buries,
Out of Seer's sight and out of Her mind,
I blasted away with power undefined,
How much time does it take to end one life?
Thief's vendetta ending this strife,
Sharper than any other knife,

Stunned from the sudden dread,
It was crimson pools that she bled,
I was in a killer's vanity,
Killing in the Thief's insanity,
Why did I kill her like this?
She was my possible wed and so harmless,
Life's only pleasure and bliss,

Later in fields I awoke,
Then at a bitter sight I provoke,
Her body was beat dark red,
I just killed the one I wanted to wed,
Who could do this to me, just who?
I sweetly kissed her and whispered, 'adieu'

Aradia, she was my queen,
A life together could be seen,
I couldn't find a reason not to love her,
She was my timeless treasure,
How do I survive on my own?
Hear me as I cry and moan,
Life has never felt so cold, bitter, and alone
Ello! I finally wrote a poem! It took me forever! But I think it was worth it.

Anyways, I wrote this poem of Aradia and Sollux because they're my OTP and basically the greatest love story that was ever created in this universe. It's just so.... :iconcryforeverplz:

I hope you enjoy this poem. hehehehe~

The picture isn't mine. I found it on youtube from a video called Pieces by Red.


Anything in homestuck is not mine. Just saying.
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PurpleAuraXD Jan 23, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Okay, I think my heart just exploded from all the sadness.

Beautifully written. My feels go off to you.
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ashfeather702 Jan 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Hehehe thank you!
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:iconchibi-shiv-212:
Q-Q right in the feels...the poem is well written
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ashfeather702 Jan 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
hehehehe thank you ^////////^
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:iconchibi-shiv-212:
You're welcome~
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Psychicbender-Mika Dec 30, 2012  Student Writer
Auuuuuuuugh my patron troll Sollux and my favorite troll Aradia... baaaaaaaaaaw :iconsobbplz: HERE HELP ME CLEAN UP MY SCATTERED FEELS AND YOU CAN HAVE THEM ALL
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ashfeather702 Jan 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
*scatters to find what's left of the feels* AHHHHHHHHHHH! This clean up is impossi8le D : : : :
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Psychicbender-Mika Jan 1, 2013  Student Writer
*installs feel magnet* *feels all attract to the magnet* HERE HAVE THEM ALLLLLLL
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Londonatheart1475 Dec 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow. This is just as good as the nepeta poem!! :iconbigheartplz:
:iconiloveyouplz:
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ashfeather702 Dec 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Aw, really? Thanks~
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