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Sea Gem

I stand on the cliff, above the deep blue.
One step forwards, then I threw
My heart, attached to a line and a hook,
A symbol of the endless pain that I took.

Now I shall fish and I shall wait,
Wishing that someone would take my bait.
This would be my only hope,
Ending feelings that I couldn't cope,

Now, where is my sweet darling bliss?
I had loved the way she used to kiss,
But that was all in the past,
Of course love never lasts,

She left without even a kiss good-bye,
While I was left all alone to cry,
She was my shining Sea Gem,
Will she ever love me again?

My Sea Gem's heart was set on the Mage,
Now it's his turn to run the stage,
I simply sat back and watched it unfold,
He took her hand and her heart was sold.

I wanted to cover my eyes and turn away,
Hoping that this vision wouldn't stay,
I can feel my lip quiver and a broken tear,
Now all I want is to disappear,

My cheeks are flushed and polished,
After watching all my hopes get demolished,
My precious Sea Gem, why don't you know
That your red love is my black foe?

The Mage is still in love with the Maid,
But she still doesn't see the trade,
My Sea Gem, her love is not in his heart,
Though she says they'll never depart,

Why doesn't she end me now?
I beg you, please kill me somehow,
I am trapped in this dark, endless hole,
Just, please, cut my throat and kill my soul.

One day, they'll open their eyes and see
How depressing my life really can be,
This morbid storm, soon it will be gone,
But, until then, everything still going wrong,

I watch my heart on the hook and line,
Wishing and dreaming for myself to be fine.
I'll wait for you, and maybe smile, too,
Because, my Sea Gem, I'm still thinking of you.
Ello! I just wrote another homestuck poem~ This one is about Eridan Ampora and how he misses Fef.

Basically, I hate seeing people dis Eridan because people think he's such an awful person. To me, he's not. Sure he killed a few trolls and asked out a bucket full of characters, but can no one see his pain? I mean, just look at him. He's really upset about how his enemy who just took away the one he loved most, and then Eridan wants to be more than friends with Feferi, but she refuses. Then Eridan must watch everything crumble around him.

People may bitch about him, but no matter what, Eridan will always be my fave male troll, for now XXXXP

Credits go to :iconsunnyfrost: for helping me out~

( I do not own homestuck or the picture above, which I found here [link] but now I have to take it down due to some mix ups! Sorry, and I give full credit to the artist! )
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Craazhy Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2012  Professional Writer
Clever concept. :)
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ASwingandMiss Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2012
Taking down the image itself is not sufficient. You should take down the entire poem since it rode on the back of someone else's art.

Please note that this is not tolerated and in future you will most likely be reported without receiving a warning.

I hope you've learned something from this.
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CharcoalShadows Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012
Dude, she wrote the poem by herself with the help of Sunnyfrost. That counts as original work, which would not violate dA's code. Ashfeather's already apologized for the mix-up. You "should" is not an obligatory term, therefore she can do what she wants with her poem.
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Sunnyfrost Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I don't believe this is a necessary action. Only the image itself was taken, not the poem, and the image was already peacefully removed and taken down, so I see no problem with her decision to keep the poem up.
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lawooops Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2012  Student Digital Artist
not bad
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Arbarac Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2012
An interesting little story, the ending of each verse is where there is true glory. However the story is somewhat longing but perhaps that is simply because I don't know of Homestruck's mourning. There is talent here of that it is clear but if I were to suggest anything it would be to address the story in a way that provides more detail to one who is not familiar with the story.
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CecilyRoseMidnight Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh god. De feels. Even if its for Homestuck, its still really pretty. :D
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ashfeather702 Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
hehehehe thank you!
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CecilyRoseMidnight Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:)
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twinkleturtle Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012  Hobbyist
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there's the linkey to the original art^^
i really like this poem :D but i think you should but the link in the description. i wouldn't want people to get mad at you, because this poem is really lovely :)
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ashfeather702 Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks for the link! I'll put it in the description!
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twinkleturtle Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012  Hobbyist
^^
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JoemanYT Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012
[link] here's the author. I can always tell by the art style.
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ashfeather702 Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I got the link on there now. Sorry, I first found it on zerochan, and I didn't know someone on dA made it.
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JoemanYT Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012
8luh
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ashfeather702 Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I fixed things up with the artist so everything is fine. I also have the link to the artist's picture and gave them credit. As you can see I took the picture down.
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JoemanYT Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012
Im sure the guy doesn't mind.
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4-3-2-fuckyou Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I honestly dislike the shipping, but this was just beautiful, and heartbreaking. My poor patron....he always makes me so sad. I can see him suffering quietly as the game progressed after his rejection. Excellent job, my dear :3
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ashfeather702 Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
hehehe thank you!
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4-3-2-fuckyou Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
no problem ^^ also, you're welcome for the fave as well (:
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GothicHikage Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012
Please place a link to the original picture so the artist can at least get the credit for it!
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ashfeather702 Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I got it on there now!
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GothicHikage Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012
Thanks a bunch!
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ashfeather702 Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
no pro8! I am truly sorry! I just patched things up with the artist!
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GothicHikage Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012
It's okay, not many people will oblige when others ask that they credit the original artist. You did the right thing!
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BuraddiTamashi Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Hey, do you want a link to the art, I'm pretty sure I know where the original is. :3
Either way, you did an amazing job with this. Like, seriously. <3
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ashfeather702 Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I just got the link on now so no worries! and thank you!
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BuraddiTamashi Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
No problem!~
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domhnalldarko Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i have no idea about anything related to homestuck but good job at taking someone elses art and not even sourcing it properly
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ashfeather702 Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I'm sorry, but I just placed the link on there now. Sorry about the that!
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akasunanosasoriXD Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
also eridan really isn't some misunderstood baby who is full of pain I mean
he's a tragic character and I love him but

he's not some sentimental mourning lover he's really petty and biased and not that much of a good person at all
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akasunanosasoriXD Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
you gotta take down that picture if you found it on zerochan then it's not yours and was likely posted there without permission, too
sorry
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ashfeather702 Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Oh okay, I'll take it down. Thank you for telling me.
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DarkKyubbi Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is beautiful. :iconletmecryplz:
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RandomProdigy Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
i actually like eridan~ he's not that bad! ::iconeridanpokerfaceplz::iconeridannyehplz::iconeridanwutplz:
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DerpyCookiez Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012  Student Artist
Agreed :D
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RandomProdigy Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconeridanrageplz: you are vvery kind~ wweigh~
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DerpyCookiez Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2012  Student Artist
Hahaha.. Why Thank Yiuu
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RandomProdigy Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconeridanthrustplz:wwhoop wwhoop~
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DerpyCookiez Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Student Artist
LOL :D~
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RandomProdigy Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconhurrhurrplz:
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DerpyCookiez Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012  Student Artist
:meow: LOL XD
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stuckcon Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012  Professional Photographer
This is very cool.
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ashfeather702 Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
hehehehe Thank you!
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